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„The Arrival of an Angel“ of Olivia Chevron
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My Dear Writer,
Yr Reader sees again a new departure in yr style. It is as if each time you round a spur in the countryside through which you are travelling and you enter a new stretch of country. The brake on yr pace between lines 9 and 11 is well-placed. Yr Reader observes that his Writer does have a choice, and the very fact that she is playing the scenarios of the arrival of this Angel through her mind means that she is quite taken with the idea.
Yr Reader likes, btw, the cool draught of yr mind. It is like the cooling woods where he hunted in the summer.
Beautiful, thoughtful verse. Feather.
Yr Reader
Yr Reader sees again a new departure in yr style. It is as if each time you round a spur in the countryside through which you are travelling and you enter a new stretch of country. The brake on yr pace between lines 9 and 11 is well-placed. Yr Reader observes that his Writer does have a choice, and the very fact that she is playing the scenarios of the arrival of this Angel through her mind means that she is quite taken with the idea.
Yr Reader likes, btw, the cool draught of yr mind. It is like the cooling woods where he hunted in the summer.
Beautiful, thoughtful verse. Feather.
Yr Reader
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