05.01.2013
Category "Filosofisch" (Poems in het Engels)
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Helga Edelsfeld

A special moment

It was a wonderful night
clear and the stars were bright.
I think, there was something in the air,
my heart was open and there
for a special moment I could see
the way of my life, my destiniy.

Helga Edelsfeld

:) painting by my husband Bernhard Edelsfeld

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Published on e-Stories.org on 05.01.2013.

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...Helga, wonderful!!!
(...ich würde "the stars were bright" schreiben, ist sicher klangvoller)
Your's sincerly, Adalbert.

freude05.01.2013

like it both! :-) Mandalena

Mandalena05.01.2013

Liebe Helga,

das war ein special moment, als ich dein Gedicht in englisch entdeckte.
So viel kann ich gerade noch, dass ich das Gedicht lesen und verstehen konnte.
Ihr scheint euch gut zu ergänzen.
Der Mann malt, Frau dichtet.
Schön, wenn es so viel Kreatives in einer Ehe gibt.
Grüße von Chris

cwoln05.01.2013

Some nights remain pearls for the soul! We dream all times of these!!! Night greetings to you Helga the Franz or Don Francesco

FranzB05.01.2013

Dear Helga,

a wonderful short poem and a nice painting.

Greetings from
Karl-Heinz

Goslar06.01.2013

This poem touches my heart, the wonderful painting completes it perfectly, dear Helga. Kind regards from RT.

rainer06.01.2013

Very good!

turamon06.07.2013

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