20.05.2005
Category "Fantasy" (Poems in het Engels)
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Justine Knolle

Ambrosia

Ambrosia

Ambrosia is the land where I am Queen.

A more just or loved one

Before me has not been.

To my right, The Chancellor

My dear old friend

The Bachelor.

My chambermaid Ruccola

Plats my hair in auburn strands.

She plays the lute and pianola

With bony, ebony, ivory hands.

My favourite pet, a Cyprese cat

Goes by the name of Cleopat.

Lounging lazily on the chaise-longue

Waiting for her dinner gong.

In my Queendom there is pearl and gems.

I ride my horses, sew my hems.

I play the harp and harpsichord,

Appoint the Ladies, Knights and Lords.

Sunday 15 & Thursday 19 May 2005

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Published on e-Stories.org on 20.05.2005.

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Nice way to put things. I like the style of your poem. It really transfers one into another world - a world of you Queendom. A nice expression. The only line that I don't like very much is the one with the chaise-longe. Maybe you can find another word for lounging?

chardin7719.09.2005

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