17.11.2006
Category "Leven" (Poems in het Engels)
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Bonnie Brooke

LUST

A woman’s naked shoulder
makes a man want to hold her.
A woman’s naked ankle
makes a man want to spank her.
A woman’s bared breast
makes a man want the rest.
A woman’s naked bum
makes a man want to come.

Inspired by the novel "Eleven Minutes" by Paulo Coelho - a recommendation.

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My Writer lacks a certain finesse and yr Reader recommends changing the spelling of the last word to "come". Otherwise, this is rather incendiary, isn't it? :)

TigerFish24.11.2006

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